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Feelings for you

I didn't know that was how you felt
You should have showed me sooner
Because now I'm the one who moved away
And the poem you wrote will have to go on unnoticed

I've missed you for so long...
And now I must miss you for so much longer...
And this time it's all my fault.

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  • skye101
    September 5, 2008

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    so is there a an actual person your talking about or is that how you just feel about stuff in general. very nice, it kinda flowed but its really short. but it all works nicely. i like the ending a lot.