When ever the sun shines
so brightly in the day
I think about you and
I have nothing left to say
You complete me so fully
whenever I meet your eyes
You make me want to sway
& take a walk into the skies
Your never-ending affection
in every purpose is so intimate
Turns me into a lil puppet
& makes me want to depend on it
It helps to go through the moments of life
to love,console and laugh all the while
keeps me smiling at everything before me
Even when i'm walking down the aisle
Forseeing everything before me when I see you
keeps me joyful and content
for seeing the very glint in your eye
forces me willingly into a lovely moment
A contest entry
- It's All In A Kiss by silverscent.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me YOUR BEST by sapphireangelwings.
750 points, ended October 2, 2008, 48 entries
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Comments
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Very cute, "lil puppet" especially though I hope that doesn't mean you do everything this person tells you to.
You have a typo on the very first line.
An enjoyeable read. -
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by lil puppet..i meant not in control dear poet...becoz...he makes me loose it whenever i see him and his eyes
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lol thnk u dear friend!!!!
much love,
~Anagha~
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