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what would you do?

Would you still love me if I lied?
Would you hold me if I cried?
Would you tell me things are gonna be ok, when I feel like fading away?

Would you….
Would you…

If I tell you that I love you,
What would you do?

If I tell that I need you,
What would you do?

If I showed you that you’re my light,
Would you stay here and me fight….

If I said that I was scared
Would you hold me close to you, and tell me that everything’s
Gonna be alright.

What would you
Do?

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    We all hope for unconditional love and I think that your lovely poem reflects this need. karen