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Camerota Dream~ Seven links

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Friday September 5 2008

Camerota Dream

I will sing for you…
For the entire evening…
You will not get tired…

Playing my guitar…
For you… for a whole evening…
I know you’ll listen…

I feel enchanted…
I will make music for you…
Listen to my heart…

Listen to my song…
You will not tire to listen…
Under the moonlight…

Listen to me play…
I hold my guitar for you…
I play your heartstrings…

Tenderly I play…
Music floating to your ear…
Singing ‘I love you’ …

You will be reborn…
Your will never tire from me…
I will make you young!...


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I am dreaming this morning~

The picture is of Camerota at night!

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  • Heroesrox
    March 4

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    The picture is lovely as is your piece. I really like this one and the music that you have to go along with it! Thanks for a lovely share and best wishes to you!


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    February 7
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    Delightful piece. I love music, the melody the rhythm. Beautifully done!

  • Bruce silver member
    January 10

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    The poem has a magical, enchanted feel - music floating in moonbeams. thought the way you treated the last line of each verse was interesting and enhanced this feeling.


  • Lencio Rodrigues
    September 29, 2008

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    Jane! I know when two people are in love there is nothing that tires them. time jsut flies even when they are doing nothing, and I can tell, even an off tune song sounds like the greatest song in the world! I too see this write from your point of view and not from the point of view of the the person for whom this song is played because in our heart we feel that whatever we do will satisfy the other and they will aprreciate it as much as we love doing it for them. This is so beautiful, the thoughts, everythign about it,

    Thanks for sharing your love, your thoughts,

    Love and light,
    Lencio


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    Humm..How lucky is the man for whome this music is played..ah..I love this verse..Jane you are wonderful always..thanks for sharing..

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