heated passage to Heaven
gazing deeply into your eyes
horizon upon the mountain
yearn more with your sighs
limitless boundaries before us
connect our future, so bright
balance between the darkness
truth, liberty and light
intensity grows with footsteps
grace insures we do no wrong
overlook the faults behind us
foundation building strong
Author notes
word bank #3 plus some word from other banks~ hoping thats alright?
A contest entry
- A few word banks.. by kimberlee meredith.
450 points, ended September 8, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Unbelieveable that you mastered the word bank like this! The contents of this writ are passionately written, and share a deep commitment with the reader. Beautiful!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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I like the rhyming flow in this poem. It's flows really nice!
"balance between the darkness
truth, liberty and light"
--I like these lines a lot!
Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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This is beautifully written my friend! Its great to see you writing again! I've missed it!
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grace insures we do no wrong,
very lovely and true to find a balance from duality into oneness.
lovely
God bless...
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