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yours.



i want to be
the cold breath on
your cheeks;

the word that makes you blush.

i want to be
your sky, your earth
your everything

until horizons scrape blue skies.

i want to be
the song you hum along to
when you are alone;

the rhyme that fits with your name.

most of all
i want to be yours.


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  • transit
    September 6, 2008

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    aaww

    what a sweet poem on wanting to be someone's all. The descriptions are lovely and different yet have a 'love" feeling to them.

    the background is great too!

    "i want to be
    the cold breath on
    your cheeks;"

    how refreshing! so much said in so few words. bravo!!


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    September 5, 2008

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    Awww I loved this it's so sweet and I love the way you wrote this it's so special and new Great work with this piece hon