i love you to the end
i love you your my friend
my soul mate my hope my life
my everything
you are the lighting to my struck
the milkey to my way
you are the one i have been waiting for
your my wonderwall
i'm yours forever even if were not together
but we are and i love you so much
you make my heart bust with all this lust
your hugs are the best
when i'm not with you i'm such a mess
i love you always even if 'm dead and lost forever!
lets stay together
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE ME A POEM by Swan song.
2400 points, ended September 20, 2008, 40 entries
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Comments
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Good rhyme I would try to make it a series of couplets
that will make it easier to read.
then i would try to make each line even that will give the poem uniformitiy, but this is not bad at all
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