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Pure Moment

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Its incredible to describe,
How the silken touch of your petals
Lifts every hair from my skin,

Tenderly caressing deep inside.

The soft glow within your eyes,
Lights a path so seldom seen
A smile so softly intelligent,

My fortune no longer is disguised.

The scent of pungent Freesias float,
And drifts gently to my soul
Awakening the deeply hidden me,

No more am I, sullen nor remote.

Rejoice at this pure moment,
As Autumn leaves begin to fall
Happenstance is revealing,

This dream is judged content.

05/09/08




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 6, 2008

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    Ah..wonderful eyes and wonderful description by it..I love this piece...well..thanks for sharing such a wonderful entry in my contest....