When a friend kneels, beseeching compassion,
true love sinks in a similar fashion.
A contest entry
- Doublet or epigrammatic closed couplet Winklings # 121 Open to all! by Lyndon.
1260 points, ended September 30, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thank you for reading.
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Human love
is concisely presented in your 'Forgiveness' poem, friend.
Thank you for this entry. 
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This is one of my favorite reads in this contest series. Very heart-warming.
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I like this one! a lot of parallels running through, I can just imagine a lover pleading, "have pity on me, can't you sense my suffering"
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This is a wonderful entry to this contest! I really like the rhyme that you have used, it is unique and gives a nice tone to the poem well done!
Keep writing
Polly
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Imagery complete ...
as the essence permeates good thought! j
y
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"When a friend kneels..." Loved the start. Made me itty-bitty heart smile. Enjoyed the read. Good luck and write on.
Dez
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Rhymed and metered to perfection and the content is appropriately epigrammatic--very well done.
Best of luck,
Bill
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Humilitiy and love... I don't think one exists without the other. Beautiful thoughts, Margaret.
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As One
Each sparrows fall is Mine, each eagle soaring is My glory...
Truly spoken words, my friend.
Fly onward and upward,
Rahad
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