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The Crow(the best movie ever)

ok the crow is a movie Staring Brandon lee, him (eric) and his new wife (shelly) (just married on devils night) are both murdered that night by a group of four guys (tin-tin)(funboy)(skank)and(T-bird). Well exactly one year later Eric's soul is brung back by a crow. He finds himself back home were he remembers everything. Now back and invincible he plots revenge. His old friend sarah(a little girl)eventually finds him and she knows everything. He kills the murderers one by one and eventually left one on one with the main villian(Grange) and grange realizes Erics weakness and shoots the bird, leaving eric now mortal. They end up dualing on top of the steep roof with the little girl hanging off the edge and eric puts his hands on Granges forehead revealing all the pain and suffering he had to endure. The pain is too much for grange so he goes limp and falls to his death. Eric rescues Sarah and they walk off (end of movie)

Sorry the intro is long but i love this movie


Two people in love
ever so deep
they made vows to eachother
forever to keep
i guess they thought
that it just felt right
to marry eachother
on Devil's Night

Then a break in
and to their surprise
a rude interruption
by four evil guys
they held eric down
and he faught for his life
as the others raped
and murdered his wife

now they turn
to the victum of rage
and kill him too
at a farely young age

Little sarah
loved both of them so
and moarned for their death
as she let her tears flow

One year later
on devils night
a crow came to the graveyard
with eric's grave in sight

Eric came out
shivering and cold
then all his memories
start to unfold

they raped and murdered
his precious Shelly
he screamed as anger
and rage filled his belly

first he finds tin tin
who holds a sharp knife
the same exact one
that murdered his wife
they fight and struggle
but eric will win
he throws the nife back
instantly killing tin tin

Now he goes on
as it constantly rains
looking for funboy
who shoots up through his veins
funboy shoots him
dead bang in his hand
and sees the whole
that is oh so grand
Now eric OD's him
using serenges
and leaps out the window
as funboy lays there and cringes

Now to t-bird
the one who drives
he straps t-bird down
and burns him alive
he wedges the gas
with a spacial deliver
to watch the car explode
into the river

one more left
skank is his name
hide and seek
is erics favorite game

Eric finds skank
skank leaps out the window
and lands right on top
of the cop car down below

Now satisfied
sarah and him
visit the graveyard
where the lights are dim
Grange the head man
the one with the power
grabs sarah
and pulls her into the tower

into the tower
inters Eric and his crow
there is one weakness
the Grange now knows
he shoots the crow
then shoots eric too
eric soon realizes
invicibility is through

But eric is determined
to save sarah now
him and Grange
end up on the top somehow

Sarah slips
and hangs from the ledge
eric and grange
swordfight on the edge
Grange strikes eric
it goes straight in
eric looks at grange
with the biggest grin

here
i have something for you
the pain and suffering
thet we went through

eric grabs granges forehead
and starts to shake and
the pain is too much
for grange to take
grange become limp
and to his demise
he falls over the edge
insantly dies

Eric saves sarah
they walk off with laughter
and everyone nowlives
happily ever after.

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sorry it's so long but i love this movi :D

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  • Confused17
    April 16

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    we have a lot in common..... I love The Crow......I love the ending to your poem.....every line is so beautiful in its own little way......congrats..


  • BloodSeeker Lette
    September 8, 2008

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    I love that movie its the best my fav part is

    Two people in love
    ever so deep
    they made vows to eachother
    forever to keep
    i guess they thought
    that it just felt right
    to marry eachother
    on Devil's Night

    Thats the best part. Its sad how he died in real life, I came to know how good of a person he was, and it was the greatest movie in the world, still wish he could of made the other three thats out. I have all four movies. The first one is the best of them all. Love the poem it is amazing.

    Well done.

    Sarah


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 7, 2008

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    hey it was brought to my attention that ihad not applauded everyone's work--this was completly unintentional and i appologize

    ~laura


  • WaterDragoon
    September 6, 2008

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    OMG!!!!! i love this its so awsome
    i love the cocept here great write ace
    ~Miranda
    * oh btw heres my picture i look goofy lol enjoy it!!


    • Ace13
      September 6, 2008
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      Well thx

      ever actually seen the movie? it's my favorite


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 5, 2008
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    "The pain is too much for grange so he goes limp and falls to his death" lol idk why but i found that immensly entertaining lol

    "Two people in love
    ever so deep" beautiful

    "they made vowels to eachother" vowels like a e i o and u? lol jk its vows

    great poem good job in the contest


  • NyteShade
    September 5, 2008

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    I Love the movie The Crow, and I love the way you set out and the flow of this poem. Nice way of starting it off with a description about the movie. Good Luck in the contest.

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