THE STORM
Rain shielding the area around you blotting out
The basketball sized hailstones punching their way through the bulgy grey canopy of clouds.
Racing, plummeting their way doun to earth like asteroids cutting their way through the atmosphere.
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE ME A POEM by Swan song.
2400 points, ended September 20, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think
Comments
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Very good
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pretty neat hu?
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Hail the size of basketballs? Yikes!!
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