Wanting each other, trying to be coy
both dying within to be the others toy
anticipations continue to persist
tempting desires difficult to resist.
Romance in the starry night air
moonlight stroll, your face so fair
hand in my arm your sparkling eyes
turning moonlight into whispered sighs.
Taking our shoes off in beach sand;
walking barefoot and holding hands.
Unable to ignore your sex appeal,
just one kiss, I decide to steal.
There is no direction to teach
we both are weakened at natures feet
our eyes gazing with beckoning desire
lips slowly meet in kisses hungry fire.
Arms take hold and our kissing turns hot
I feel the stir inside my chest, a knot.
We press our bodies in breathtaking need
and on anxious lust we both burn to feed.
Author notes
prompt: So write me something that will warm me up when I return. Between TEN and TWENTY lines only!
In a list
A contest entry
- Bring on the Heat! - Adults only by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 18, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDEN RHYMES by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 12, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well that was passionate to say the least. Well written and a fine penning
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Now that has some elements of heat to it. Love the rhyme and flow, and even more so, the imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Steaming up the screen not afraid of your sensuality ... your words flow with ease as they rhyme freely settling in thoughts of desirous lust feeding the flame.
Think you can teach all those SNAGs a trick or two. A great take on the prompt exploring the sensual in any language 'bring on the heat' chasing toys now that could be fun.
Nicely crafted. Good luck in the contest.
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This Brings On The Heat
Wow this is a very fun sensual alluring piece of poetry. Oh and the imagery is just stunning. I love how it starts out then while you read it, you just get hotter and hotter.
Wanting each other, trying to be coy
both dying within to be each others toy
anticipations continue to persist
tempting desires difficult to resist
WOW THAT ALONE GETS YOU GOIN!! LOL, Best wishes in the contest.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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