Flawless Feminine Form
All aglow on that screen;
That screen depicting my desire.
How could such a feeling come from you?
How could seeing you feel so good?
And yet fill me with such shame.
A contest entry
- Lost Your Forever? by Restless and True.
650 points, ended September 19, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Interesting; and as restless & true said, it does leave you wondering - if you're on the right path, taking the intended meaning, or seeing/thinking something that isn't truly there.
nice job; best wishes in the contest
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This was short, but I actually really liked it.
It was too the point, and while you could guess what it was about, it still kind of left you wondering.
Thanks for entering =]
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