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A Dreamers Creation.x

Alive among the dreamers
Living in a haze
Webs of lies and twisted memories
Fog the view of reality
Those who long for truth
Are lost in waves of confusion
And a mist of hope
Blinds all to the harsh past
All stand in awe of their creation
There is no turning back
Once you have tasted
the bitter sweetness of their lies
Where pain means nothing
And all but beauty is pushed aside
In their world of lies
Where truth holds no worth
And where passion for remembrance is over powered
One such as I do not belong
Alive among the dreamers.x

Author notes

Option Two
I really fel I don't belong at the moment
And I'm sick of everyone lying just to make things seem better then they are.
I know how shit it all is.
And I'm just lost

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  • neoladyem
    September 29, 2008

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    I can totally relate to this of being lost in a world that seem nothing but full of lies. You really capture and show that feeling here in this poem.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Very powerful write filled with deep emotion.
    Beautifully written
    & wonderfully expressed.

    Best of luck & thanks for entering


  • DarknessOfSanity
    September 9, 2008

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    kudos

    this feels deep. and you make it very relatable. we've all been there, hun, and you put it in words! fenominal! i liked this alot. thanks for the entry, good luck!


  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    wow


    i feel you i really do this poem spoke to me
    you have no idea

    i love this so very much
    thank you so much for entering!

    and good luck