From the left
And to the right They drop
Like fruit so ripe
To rot on earth
People die.
People walk on.
Forget the ones that lie.
Step forward,
And forget those gone.
Clutch your own arms
around yourself
And cry,
Cry because your alive.
So warm, and safe.
Cry not for them
but for the soul
they left behind
In this Cold abyss of Hell.
Get up,
Get over yourself
Accept that there gone.
Because he cant.
Wake up mommy!
She wont Nathan
Because she cant….
Why?
Can you answer the little boy….
yes i know its a quote but its my take on it.
Comments
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Wow!! A very powerful written image!! I can't imagine the heart break of having to explain to a child why there mom would never wake again!! That would be the saddest thing!! You did a wonderful job portraying this write!!! This is amazing and incredible!! Sad but well written!!
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Well I for one can say that NO I couldn't in a million years choke out the words to explain to a child why their mommy wouldn't wake up...I can't even imagine being in that sort of situation...When you threw in names it really threw me off....sort of confusing the way its talking about people in general, then to just one and then another threw in there all at once. But I liked it anyhow.
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Wow. this was REALLY sad, but it made a lot of sense. really raw and didn't beat around the bush. I really enjoyed reading this. keep up the good work
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Humm..this is a touching piece..a hearfelt as well...well done..and my thanks for sharing it my friend.....
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