What a laughable idea
Just the thought of having a child
Yet here I stand still longing for one
Uhh this is silly
I gave it up long ago
When I started my work and work I must do
And now I have tears streaming down my face
That assinine jerk
Why did I ever marry him to begin with
What is wrong with me
All he came by for was to piss me off
To see my damn reaction
And damn it now I'm giving it
Why does he make me feel this way
Why does he bring back such sorrowfilled memories
But more importantly
Why do I still love him
Why do I still want me and him to have a baby
I can't even keep my head up
These tears are unbearable
And I want him by my side again
But right now I must work
If not for myself for him
So that one day we can love each other again
And make new memories to remember
Author notes
Wolf's Rain (Cher in the begining)
A contest entry
- #7 10th Anime Anniversary Contest by ModernXTimes.
700 points, ended September 20, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Maternity by SeaWithYourHeart.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I was a bit thrown off by the lack of punctuation throughout the piece at first. It kind of worked in your favor though. I don't know if that was intentional. You're lucky it worked because I'm a stickler for grammar.
Anyway, I liked it. I would have never thought to write a poem from Cher's point of view, especially since I never really liked her particularly. Either way, I thought it really captured her thoughts and emotions very well. It was very real. Good job! good luck!
sincerely,
modernxtimes
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