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Rush~

Rivers of red wine spring forth devotion,

filling the voids of dehydrated souls

Senses on twirling tongues taste affection,

elusive psalms mend peace for wordsmith woes.

 

A rush of sensation fuels my fire,

perfect portraits begin with pale paper

Where landscapes of ink create desire,

lover's flame flickers when minds do mature.

 

Throw caution where the wind begins to whirl,

kiss tightly the lips of her honesty

Lacerate those painful paths that unfurl,

bend a knee to exalt love's symphony.

 

Let the storms drift from lands to seven seas,

Our light is justified by destiny.

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Thanks for the excellent background redcatjazzoflove.
-Sonnet- By: Timothy Weaver~ Thanks for reading me.

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  • sense surreal gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    A rush of sensation fuels my fire,
    perfect portraits begin with pale paper
    Where landscapes of ink create desire,
    lover's flame flickers when minds do mature.

    I love the sublime effect of this part
    it feeds the mind's pleasure principle


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    love it now this is a very great piece here Mushy nice job hon you did great with this


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Rivers of red wine spring forth devotion,
    filling the voids of dehydrated souls

    Beautiful words here and throughout the entire poem. I just loved it! Nicely inspirational! Well done!!!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    This is a great piece

    Indeed as we each through eyes of need often hide our thoughts of truth from others for fear they may think we are lonely when truthfully we are but choose to remain within our own shackles where pride holds the key


  • Riamh
    September 5, 2008
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    Well done poet! This was a great read.
    Slayer


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    "Throw caution where the wind begins to whirl..."

    Pick a line, any line...and you set the mind
    adrift in emotion...

    Aesthete


  • penman gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such an incredible background. So very well done. And fabulous poem. Thank you for sharing.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 5, 2008

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    wow this was very lovely.... hehe.. loved it... great write you have penned thanks for shairng this........


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    A really captivating write full of deep emotion. Beautifully penned.
    Thank you for sharing
    Gaylene


  • LaylaLace
    September 5, 2008

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    Your words were very passionate and the form of your poem flowed very well. I love the third stanza the most. Great write!


  • nevadapoet
    September 5, 2008

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    This is an incredible write...full of passion and breathtaking imagery...it is delicious to read...I feel the sweetness ooozing stanza after stanza, teasing me, making me want more. You are very talented and I appreciate your talent.

    Be Well,
    Nevadapoet


  • PerfectImperfection
    September 5, 2008

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    WOW!!!! How do you do these so well bro??? This is incredible, I truly admire the form - but am just so lost with rhyme lol. The background goes so well with this - that is an awesome picture!! The imagery and devotion of the poem itself is outstanding!! I really loved this, from the gentle sullen hues explode love's beauty. Excellent write!


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Your words as always are so beautiful it's hard for me to find the words to describe how I feel about them. With this piece you leave me with alot of wondering what love is really all about and you keep my hopes up that there are really true romantics left in the world so my search is not in vain.
    Thanks for sharing!
    Hugs!!!
    Cayla


  • poeticpieces
    September 4, 2008

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    Lovely Background A Poetic Piece Dad!

    You can pen a sonnet so indepth.
    I like the flow, content, and rhyme here.
    You're the best dad, much love, from your son.

    Timothy Jr. aka poeticpieces


  • poetryrocksmysox
    September 4, 2008

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    Beautiful,

    The way you weave your words that flow spiritually from your heart and soul always bestows such beauty upon us as readers. Thanks for sharing this gift that's within you, you amaze me, and keep on penning poet!


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 4, 2008

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    a wonderful weaving of deep empassioned and empowered desire towards love's destiny. the imagery is totally awe inspiring and heartfelt. the lines that touched me the most on a personal level were:

    Rivers of red wine spring forth devotion,
    filling the voids of dehydrated souls
    Senses on twirling tongues taste affection,
    elusive psalms mend peace for wordsmith woes.

    Our light is justified by destiny.

    my dearest you always pen such wonders that bring tears of hope or peace to my soul. well done and many blessings always xxxx



  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    September 4, 2008

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    aww tim this is so sensual and full of love. this really is an amazing sonnet! I loved it so so much. Your flow seemed alittle...hesitant but that was all I loved this alot! keep penning
    to you my friend!
    -kitty xxx


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Beautifully penned.
    Great job on the sonnet and
    a beautiful Bg.

    Love you

    Passionspromise


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    I like it.

    Enjoyed that couplet.

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