Sweet lullabies
Drowning, seething
In your lies
The pain comes in
Screaming with glee
Heeding the warnings
That I would never see
All the pain I know
All the hope I lost
Everything I let show
All of it at your cost
Will you ever learn
Ever understand me?
The times I yearned..
For me and you to be
everything you speak of
All the pain I hide
All my love
So All the times I lied
Im so sorry, for everything
A contest entry
- CONTESTS ARE AWESOME :D by etoile.
525 points, ended September 6, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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i actually liked the rhyming in this.. i didnt even notice it rhymed until half-way through, so it wasnt forced at all.
Sweet lullabies
Drowning, seething
In your lies
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those were my favourite lines
thanks for entering and goodluck
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This confused me alot..... lol but i still liked it...i am easily confused though :-? so prob just me
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