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Day’s End

It’s late, been a long day and I’m feeling tired.
Then I log into AP and I feel inspired.
Words seem to flow, sometimes intelligently,
and I share, on a page, a small part of me.

Thoughts that were jumbled are magically clear.
Feelings, suppressed, are suddenly near.
I can talk with people who judge by content
and not by my station or the school where I went.

I find I can explore all the feelings inside
without fear of those who love to deride.
There’s even an outlet for my competitive side.
I’m hooked on little trophies I must confide.

You ask how I’m feeling as I sit here and write.
It’s late, time for bed, so I wish you “Good Night.”

(Well, maybe I could write just one more tonight )



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Prompt: What are you feeling right now?
Picture Credit: http://mwill8886.deviantart.com/art/final-report-92636535
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  • Lucy.
    September 11, 2008

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    Oh, I love it!!! This is brilliant...thank you for sharing a part of you with us all. We're lucky to have you.


  • Enkeli
    September 7, 2008

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    Haha, I love this! It's cute, well-written... AND THE RHYME WORKS. That's a rarity in my opinion... truly a good write. =] Thank you for entering.


    Enkeli


  • Jesann gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    Loved it,loved it,loved it!!! well said and well expressed.


  • toomysterious
    September 6, 2008

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    Excellent.

    Well expressed sentiments here which I can relate to. Do this very often and you have expressed it so well. Good luck in your contest.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    I love this you did a great job on this write! Love the ending


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    I really love this poem a lot.. nice rhyme, its perfect and it flows so nicely.. hmm that pic looks like me at times, asleep on the keyboard.. you know it leaves a funny imprint on ones face lol
    I'd never judge you for anything.. of course you can do one more tonight... you know that you want to.

    this poem is awesome.. good luck in the contest my lover

    kat


  • Angelflower
    September 4, 2008

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    Lol.. This was just too great.. Well it sounds like you had a good day! lol. Best of luck in the contest!

    Angel

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