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eternal youth

picturesque approaches
require brief spans of childhood
of the gentle caliber

bestride where knees reside now
we bypass bitterness
and stride with eternal youth
 
 
 
 

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  • Frogzter gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    I agree, such depth in few words! Great take on the prompt! Thanks for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    ~Sigh~ so eloquent bro. I wish you all the best.


  • Frozentearz
    September 5, 2008

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    I like the way you worded this and gave it such great depth in so little words.
    Wonderful take and thanks for joining in.
    Love and LIght
    Frozentearz


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Nice Job Brother.