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Special Moments

Is anything better
than that special moment
Before lips touch together
seconds before connection is complete
looking deep
into the pools
of the others eyes
Sweeping emotions
pouring out
Feeling hearts
beating as one
each breathing
slightly deeper
Passion is complete
right before our souls join

Author notes

Picture Prompt: please Credit: Passion_by_Melindee

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Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Very beautiful .. full of romantic feelings of desire and union! Congrats on the silver!


    • buffsab99
      September 23, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. Been really struggling with my muse and busy with my new job. Hope all is well with you We still have to colab on part 3 of Mistress


  • Angelflower
    September 10, 2008

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    this is really beautiful.. it's soft and sweet, you did such a wonderful job with this picutre! sensual yet innocent in a way.. I like that! thank you very much for sharing. I greatly enjoyed reading this.. Best of luck in the contest..

    Angel

    • buffsab99
      September 12, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much for Silver. I have been struggling so much with my writing lately. This trophy feels really good and inspirational right now


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 4, 2008

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    me too struggling to find my muse too..... but seems you did a good job here.. i like this.... good luck in contest......!!!!!!!!

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