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Sound of Inner Peace

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ripples gently chase each other across placid water
calmly rolling along as if following serenity,
my thoughts flow inwardly upon quiet pondering
trying to imagine wonderment of such ease,

soothing melodies rustle in tranquil breezes
under cloudless, pale blue skies,
as summer gives way to crispness of autumn
and nature unfolds her beauty in solace,

senses breathe in brilliance of creation
placing harmony of soul in tune with peacefulness,
as I close my eyes, becoming one with my surroundings
feeling so near to heaven in that one serene moment.

 

 

 

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Pic Credit- Frozentearz

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    I think the closer we are to nature the more serene we are and more in touch with our creator.

    This is beautiful sis!



  • Rclane gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    You have stepped beyond the picture and into the moment and penned it so well in ink.

    Serenity flows so gracefully with each word that one is lost in the moment......


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    This is indeed beautfiful.... elegant! Serene and soothing. Great take on the prompt, it really takes me there in mind. THanks for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Frozentearz
    September 5, 2008

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    aww this was beautiful,
    I so love your closing line it is if the steps are leading the way ! And ooh how the sense breathe when we take it what is before us.
    Loved this one to bits.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz


  • penman gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wow, such an incredible poem. So very well expressed. And a fabulous used of descriptions


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 5, 2008
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    Chez elegant!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Just too beautiful Your imagery is spectacular and the flow of this is wonderful. Al the best with this
    gaylene

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 5, 2008
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      Thank you ma'am. The pic is gorgeous and made me want to be sitting on those steps! Seems such a quiet, peaceful place.


      Linda


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 4, 2008

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    way to paint the picture you did awesome.... love it...... thanks for sharing this and good luck inc ontest.....


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Thanks for sharing the serenity, sis


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      Aww You're welcome bro! It's more of a silent prayer right now lol I need that ^ ^ ^ ^ up there!

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