Magic orb that shines the night,
gives the waters rise
Show to me your shining light,
be my mystic guide
Plant yourself into my thoughts,
then take me where you may
Give me peace and serenity,
lead me not astray
Touch my heart with love so pure,
I never can dispose
Guide me to enlightenment,
my soul to be exposed
Author notes
Option B credit photo bucket
A contest entry
- Anyone Up For A Morning Quickie?? HUH?? by Sweet Impatience.
850 points, ended September 6, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You've done a beautiful job with this poem.. excellent take on the prompt. I really love the last stanza.
good luck in the contest
kat
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I love this...the flow, the language and the sentiments, so beautifully expressed.
Best of luck in the contest.
SJ -
Boog,
this is your "poemiest poem" to-date....I'm really impressed! Well done, Man!
Slayer
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Nice Write
Very good flow and great story that fights the picture.
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