Wow what striking features
an awesome smile,
great hair, and
such beautiful eyes.
At first I was attracted
to your angelic beauty,
but then we talked,
no drama, no games, and no lies.
What can I say
but you intrigue me.
So where do we
go from here?
Now isn't that
an intriguing question.
Maybe a few questions
could make this more clear.
Like for instance:
Would you like to
go out for dinner?
You know we all gotta eat.
Or maybe dinner,
and a movie?
Now wouldn't that
be a nice treat?
Are we even ready
to move on to a date?
Or is there more
to be gained if we wait?
You know I am interested in you
and I have a lot in time to ask.
I imagine a sweet game
lets call it Molly may I, for this task.
For instance Molly may I call you?
Molly may I ask you out?
I will always be a perfect gentleman.
Of that you need never doubt.
I will always treat you like a lady.
And after each date pray you smile for days.
Listen to your likes and dislikes,
and make you laugh, we will have fun in so many ways.
In time Molly may I hold your hand,
and give you a little hug?
Can we cuddle and share a movie,
all warm, cuddly, and snug?
I could play this little game forever.
But honestly I am just your average nice guy.
So what do we have to lose in trying?
I guess the only real question is will you take a chance with me? What do you say? Molly May I?
I know we both are searching for
something thats forever and true.
Are you willing to take a chance on love?
So Molly May I LOVE YOU?
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Comments
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Very good very creative but how often do you find no drama or games lol thank you for the entry
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GOOD LUCK TO YOU
What a thought no drema no games NO LIES! WOW This is very sweet and to the point. But true in so many ways , You have just to ask to love its just the point if shes waitting to hear molly may I! Very good write
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Great!!! but the rhyming was a little different. at first you started off with the last line in the stanzas ryhming, then halfway through, you changed it to the 2nd and 4th lines. but i kinda liked how you did that. original. great work!
-ap daughter
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