ok so there's a girl named mady that talks to me in my sleep who tells me that i'm crazy and has somthing for my heart.that says i hate you then i love you who says i'll kill you and then i want you alive.sometimes i wonder if she means what she says to me if she's in pain if shes hurt or if she as fear.i dont want to ask her these questions for i fear she will leave me for she is the only real freind i have. poeple think i'm wierd for talking to mady but she can see my pain my depression my life.so she tells me one day she'll rip my heart from my body and put it in her's then she'll be real i say "ok mady you can do that but only take haft" then we laugh and forget everything. mady may say things that make me want to cry but i love her and if she leaves i know i'll i want be the same. so say what you want about mady go ahead and tell me how you feel but realize you dont haft to with the girl who's so sweet and so mean but forever i will love this crazy little girl named mady.
A contest entry
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thank you so much for joining my contest and I'm so sorry it's taken me longer than I suspected to judge it! Please forgive me
lovely write!
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a story rather than a poem
this is not poetry, it is prose. it is not deep, but rather an easy fantasy that does not open the reader to further thought. while it is a good story, i cant help but wish it had more flow to it. this was a good read, thank you.
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what option is this?
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I really do lyk this. Its very good. But there are many mistakes which distracted me. Thanx for entering and good luck
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Nice write, but this contest is for poems that have won an honorable mention. I'm sorry but I'll have to remove this from the contest.
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whisper
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wow
a really great poem has a bit of creepy to it
i actually had a imaginary friend when i was little but untill i was 12 i didnt think he was imaginary i could see him and hear him -
totally love it i have an alter ego named vannah.
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is that toko hotel
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Totally fascinating poem. Quite an unusual situation. You have a great imagination. Good luck in the contest!
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it's not imagination
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I do rather think that this is a very good poem and I think that it has a very significant meaning. Well done.
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deathgirljoel123
i loved it cause it makes me think of my evil side and it totally says the truth. GOOD JOB -
deathgirljoel123
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