projections of curved spears
are apparitions of appendage
no animus alters spirit
predisposed to afterglow's
arrangement within the present
our soul exists without blemish
to foster physical brushwork
of an artistry in progress
and it is not chevalier
to believe in life's purpose
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Enkeli.
400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
very strong and passionate you have ways with words that bring the truth of humanity to us all you have talent that brings life to your poems for all your readers and they are always enjoyable. Even though I might have to look up a word sometimes because sometimes I have never heard the word before But you have great talent in all that you do You do a surperb job and you always amaze me.
Your poeit Fan......
Angel
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wow, I loved the line.. our soul exists without blemish... it fits my life expessially right
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So strong brother mine.. Short, intense and just all around you
.. Best of luck in the contest 
Angel
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WOW. Beautifully penned words here. I love your use of vocabulary, and how you wrote it so cleverly.
-our soul exists without blemish
to foster physical brushwork
of an artistry in progress
...
Definitely my favorite lines. Good luck in that contest ♥
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"chevalier"... not an everyday word but so apropos... another wonderfully complex write with meanings within meanings... Well done Mark. Best of luck...
Ken
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Thank you, so much for your entry. Beautifully worded, with a strong point made in relatively few words.
Thanks again, good luck poet
♥
Enkeli -
Nice Write
Different from what I have read in a wial. And I thank you for a good read and something to think on.
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You've been busy tonight I see
Strong as ever bro
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