Decomposing into bits of deafened apologies &&
crying myself into a hunger stained panic attack,
you swore we could run away from thees sleepless
nights && weight losses,but i knew i would never
be able to run fast enough.
emotions spilled from beneath broken fingernails,
Darling you make me shake like the psycho little
girl I am,cut away every little bit of me you think
is gonna make it,[guess it sucks for the heart]
&& tell me one more time your sure im not to crazy
after all.
My head was floating in the toilet && morally blind
romances had taped themselves to the back of my mind,
scrawling [possible] illnesses over my hipbones,you
sucked on Technicolor cigarettes && the most I could do
was lose myself in your green swirled irises.
Laxatives flushed away mistakes && diet pills burned the
calories to nothing [remind you of anyone?].Vomiting reality
into fairy tales && injecting confessions into flat line
heart beats,[sorry sweety,to late for forgiveness].Exploding
into netherland regrets && plastic attractions,just tell me
sweety,how long can you hold on?
Author notes
Slam Glam Blackouts
uhm,kinda a mix of DP,vocab && love =]
A contest entry
- [Gorgeous Vocabulary ♥] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 29, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow... This is beautiful and yet tragic... So many emotions so many "diseases" expressed throughout... This is absolutely wonderful... Keep it up.
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Taintingly Beautiful
I love this poem. It's amazing.
I do see that you're missing a few spaces and periods, etc etc, but that may be on purpose. This is beautiful. Taintingly beautiful.
You've inspired me to write a poem. If you'd like to read it, http://allpoetry.com/poem/4572263 ^.^
This is an amazing write. Keep writing, don't stop. =]
~Solo~
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I really like this. I love the descriptions and details that you've used. I love how real and extreme the emotions sound. Great job and thanks for entering
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