Your fluidity amazes me,
amiable are your movements.
I adore you....
Charming me everyday
figuring out what I like,
love, dislike, hate...
You're perfect for me,
moving so smoothly,
dancing hypnotically.
Yes, you please me well,
but you're a mystery
to me....
How do you breath,
how do you thrive,
what sustains your life?
As much as I want you,
to be taken in by you,
I fear you…
Will I be swallowed up
and lost forever in you,
if I join you in this dance?
Author notes
Me: beinbienalsante
Photo credit to:http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg
thought I'd enter since..... just thought I'd enter.
Busy Background? ♥♥ Aboomer may have it if he wants it. ♥♥
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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are u talking about watching a dancer dance cause im not sure im sorry anyway if thats true what a poem describing it btw what does your s/n mean on AP??
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and it's metaphoric for feelings of love for someone.
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No, I'm talking about the background, for the contest I entered this poem in.
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First off 'beinbienasante' - I have to say I love what you did with the background - and the way you've centered this, and the font color you've used - is perfect..
Lovely wording with depth. I like how you have drawn the picture into your dance of love. this is very nicely done.
Thank you for your lovely entry.
best wishes in the contest.
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