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♦Like•A•YoYo♦

you used to save me
but now you just brake me
i gave and gave you everything
and you just take me
i'm like a yoyo
that you can't see to
drop to the ground
but the more you throw
the more I fall down
edging closer to
the end of the string
i don't know how long i can stay
before i fall directly on my face
but can you tell me
what will happen
once you let me hit the ground?

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  • Dirty and Broken
    September 5, 2008
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    *break, not brake
    it's interesting, though
    but, i think, overly used