Exhaling Scents Inhaled

Scent of lavender upon skin

fragrance of passion

inhaled,

tender release

of exhuberating pleasure

rain drops falling

erotically divine

beauty's

inhaled,

soft sigh flows

quickly from warm lips

Winds carrying

soft petals aroma

the bud opens,

inhaling

freshness, purity

from the

inside, out...

Exhaling scents inhaled,

lifes existence taken in....

Waters flowing

rapidly,

inhaling

the slap of coolness

streams have to offer

breathless, serene

In and out

as odors make their way

wakening nostrils

inhaling

life we enjoy sweetness

object to sours kiss

living moment to moment...

Air in, slowly

patiently, calmly

then exhale

releasing burdens weight

Exhaling scents inhaled,

life's existence taken in....

Author notes

A contest entry for:
breathe
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by Namita

breathe by Namita. 800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
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Amunet Wolfbane
October 16, 2008

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Lavender is a wonderous scent isn't it? This reminds me of the turn of the seasons. How it ebbs into the next, leaving a whisper behind.
cricketjeff
September 9, 2008
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Poetry for you really is like breathing isn't it?
Swan song
September 4, 2008
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This is beautiful dear. I suspired with every stanza
and ended with a lovely sigh!
Griswold
September 4, 2008

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Very well done sweetheart, a very soothing poem for the contest prompt. Smoothly flowing start to finish. Love you baby...Scott
Cerulean Sunrise
September 4, 2008
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I thought this was very pretty.
The Drifter
September 4, 2008

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You have just perfectly discribe the most perfect breathing exercise for finding peace--leting you che grow--you inner energy to expand.
You are beautiful--such a sweet way of discribing this exercise;
You are so talented.
Love you,
bw