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To my Hero

Once upon a time, in a magical world.
The skies grew dim for a beautiful girl.
Her world was in agony, and she in despair.
Her sadness so deep, her heart it ensnared.
She was hurt, and torn, she thought it was the end.
Who knew her hearts murderer would be her own friend.
She's incredible, amazing, and he caused her strife.
Now he has to suffer without her in his life.
This poem will be short, but I truly must say.
These rhymes are annoying, and topic; cliche.
I just had to write this poem for you,
To make you smile, maybe laugh, anything would do.
So I hope you did smile, and your sadness at peace.
I wish you all happiness, my friend; Elise!!

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  • zangy556
    February 8
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    awww hun this poem is so cute! I liked the beginning =]


  • xBlackfirewingx
    December 4, 2008
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    WOW

    Very pretty and touching! The ending was a little off, but I get it and it's sweet!


  • EliseSlaughterx3
    September 4, 2008
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    Words can't describe how much I love it.