If you haven't realized
Death is rebirth: let me explain
I have been writing poems of self destruction
Saying I was done and I didn't care
when the whole time I was rebuilding.
producing more positive vibes
gaining more "feel good juice"
sad to say I'll do it all over again
But as long as I have more pages to write
And my tear glands have made more tears
I'll be ready.
Good was once weak
But now is better
evil was once ruling
but now is weak
i have rebuilt and learned a new lesson.
my little ounce of hope
has blossomed into a new more positive person.
sad to say i won't remember this when I'm low
but it's okay
because when I'm finish destructing
It will add a new chapter
To shattered beauty's book of poems.
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Very true I can relate Tahnk you for entering
I think this poem has a strong foundation i would try to change the flow a bit to make it a little more poetic but this is good and i would call it good street honest poetry
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