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God With Us

We see him in the moonlight
keeping the world in his sight
even though the night is the darkest.
God is with us and we are all blest,
even when we are asleep
with every thought that we keep
he listens to our heartbeat ,
nightmares becomes a dream with a ending so sweet.
He is part of the sunlight
shining on us with his strong might.
As the new day begins,
God is with us in our heart his love gives us our grins.

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  • Vera Rich
    April 16

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    Sorry... I cannot comment on this because I cannot read it. If you want people to read your work, please make sure that it is legible. Black words on a white or near-white ground have served the human race well for several thousand years!


  • Samplette gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    A calming read. He is with us always! Isn't that a wonderful knowledge? Thank you for the entry, nicely done.
    Sam


  • Olivias Violin
    September 5, 2008

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    "even when we are asleep
    with every thought that we keep
    he listens to our heartbeat" - Very good!


  • Tirrell
    September 4, 2008

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    Beautiful in gift of spirit, I would have settled for simply God is with us... Though this is fine as is and a beautiful bit of spirituality. wonderfully done.