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Poetryitis - a deadly disease

I can't write,
the raven that flew so high
with a purpose
is now grounded.
The poetic words
that once were...
stale and unused
in a box filled
with angry emotion.
Where has the inspiration
and creative juice gone?

The poetic masses
a jumbled ball of
" I like it" " I hate it"
All to please the allmighty
God of poetry success.

Give us our pleasant poetry
site back...
The raven that flew so high
now lay
wounded.

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The new AP changes have made me bitter.

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  • Balladeer
    September 13, 2008
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    I'm afraid the answer is....nevermore.


  • bloved
    September 4, 2008

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    The new changes on AP have left me...indifferent. I don't know if I dig it or not. I guees because it is still new.

    But I do understand your bitterness