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My rant to you my dear

It goes in one ear and out the other
Your just like the rest sometimes
You listen some and then it all comes undone

I scream and I complain
You sit and murmor and make me feel shame
I cry and you say stop
But then were just falling apart

I climb out of bed and say good morning
Then it is all down hill by evening
The complaining, the loneliness, it is just another game

We speak of marriage and kids
But then it is like I am not important enough sometimes
You say you have too much on your plate
Maybe this was all just a big mistake

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written: 9-4-08

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  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    ok so i must tell you how much this hits home

    i am feeling like ths right now

    at this very momment i had to sigh and take a breath and idk

    i mean i identify with this so much

    i love it

    amazing

    and im sorry

    thank you and good luck