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Pure Serenity

 

Beauty's given freely,

calm and joy abounds.

Softly a euphonic breeze

of nature resounds.

 

Meditating in His Spirit,

caught up in His rest.

Humbly seeking Jesus,

praying to pass faith's test.

 

Oblivion to past sins,

forgiven and anew.

Basking in His glory,

beneath a sky so blue.

 

Totally submerged,

in His Holy Spirit.

Never more to doubt,

His faithfulness endureth.

 

 

 

 

 

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Photo by: Frozentearz

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  • Frozentearz
    September 5, 2008

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    Another wonderful soft poetic poem of thoughts.
    I so love how the rivers edge and all it has to offer
    brings so much to a mind.
    I just love being there!
    Thanks for entering always a joy to have you with us.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz


  • smonte19124 gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Mesmerizing

    The imagery of your words are mesmerizing. It's as if you're experiencing the words. A fantastic poem that does honor to the picture prompt. Let me be the first to congratulation you on your next trophy.
    God Bless


  • ShelleyA gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    A beautiful write and message. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling. Very good flow, rhyme and tone. Nice imagery and rhythm. Elegant verse. Good word choice, assonance and nice alliteration. Your faith shines in this piece. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Violinstrings silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    interesting

    different approach and words to relate to pic


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Your words add such a tranquil and serene edge to the pic. This is beautiful! Thanks for entering!

    Frogz~

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