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Epic Rage

I hear Crows screech
birds sing
shiny diamond ring
Two Lovers
good match for one another
hand in hand
wedding band
Beautiful whispers in my ear
I do not fear.
He walks away
never returns
says sorry
forever burns
Heartache
despair.
Remember thinking
life's not fair.
Broken soul
shattered dreams
Go away.
Help me.
Another soul
a life to take.
Hurts to live
too hard to die
What to do?
Suicide.
Demonic Rage.
Angels Cry.
Poison Tears.
Nobody Hears.

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  • Bob Fox
    September 29, 2008

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    This is a dark revealing piece of poetry. The pain of abroken heart and words not truthful. But the end shall not come. For it is the beginning of a great lesson. And love will come in due time.


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    The eternity locked up inside this poem is framiliar to me. I know the twists and torments that a person goes through when someone walks away. Forever does burn and life is most assuredly not fair. That is painfully true.