we ran
like lava fleeing from the cavern;
underestimating
the power of the fireworks
falling from our hearts
that formed ice crystals
within our eyes.
Author notes
"I lie here on the ocean floor,
broken castle by the shore & I made this mess,
I built this fire, are you still mine?"
Earthquake - The Used.
25 words
my muse has been gone lately so this isnt that great 
but i tried.. hopefully you like it
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Quote Prompt by EverxEnding.
450 points, ended September 15, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well deserved silver, well well deserved.
I love the contrast to the fire and the heat and the ice crystals, beautifully done
Shelly
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lovelovelove the juxtaposition of fireworks and ice crystals
and they're both such pretty words/images!
congrats on silverrr. -
Very vivid and great imagery
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Yes this is called the beauty of life where this whole world endure..I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it...
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wow
that was very good
no shut up
your muse is not gone
you are still very much amazing!!!!
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aww thanks hun <333
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Woooman.
You better win.
That's all I have to say.
♥ ♥
-Mary -
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shankyouuuu
♥
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