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depth

window frames,
painted in shades
lead into
my rhinestone
heart,
filled with shadows.

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13 words.

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  • letters to no one
    January 9

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    I love the number 13
    and these 13 words were glorious.

    That is a cheesy word, but I do believe this is one of your best

    Shelly
    xxx


  • aanika
    September 15, 2008

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    hmmm..
    I like it but I feel like something is missing after 'shades'
    shades of what lol?

    i like rhinestone and shadows though
    this whole piece is a big pretty image


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 12, 2008

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    You have packed quite a bunch of emotions in this short piece; I love the use of word rhinestone ... unique and rare to read it works great in this

    ♥
    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • written-in-ink
    September 7, 2008

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    i love this

    i love how you are able to take very few words and somehow make it sound so amazing

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