Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The Rise of the Moon Goddess

Missing image
Dedicated to all moon bathers!



She rises up from the opalescent deep,
To collect her ascension and eternity reap,
To spy the big blue glowing moon,
Her departure from earth came all too soon...

In the blue magical eternity she treads the light,
Of the big blue glowing moon so bright,
Of glistening silk and delicate trails,
This Egyptian goddess into eternity sails.



Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
Contest Anyone Up For A Morning Quickie?? HUH?? by

AngelWithDarkWings
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2419883
15 Poets
30 - 60 words
you have until tonight to write me something wonderful...
Everyone knows the rules by now I hope & if not ask..
You have Options.. Everyone loves Options right?? Here are
your Prompts.
You can use any or all options.. Please Place Option # in
AN.. credit photobucket
Have fun
and
enjoy yourselves
kat
Enter this contest
  * This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be
able to see your name.
* Closes in 13 days, or after 3 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 500
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem



OPTION:B chosen Credit: PhotoBucket.

Picture Depicts:
Egyptian Goddess female standing in water gazing as a huge
blue moon.

In a list

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 9 of 9

  • Kazytc silver member
    September 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Thanks millions!

    Thanks millions and millions for kindly awarding me a Bronze for my poem in your wonderful contest which I enjoyed immensely, and thanks for the wonderful and kind review of my poem too you are so kind.
    Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
    Good luck in all of your contests hope you win Gold in them all!
    Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc XX


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Gorgeous!

    Such a beautiful write with some
    wonderful imagery here! I love the
    thought and creativity that you put
    into this one my friend! All the best
    to you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 6, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks millions Jeremy !

      Thanks millions Jeremy, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Beautiful

    this poem is absolutely wonderful. the rhyme is wonderful, flawless the flow is outstanding. you did an excellent job with the prompt.. your words created a wonderful, & beautiful picture.. Outstanding job with both the prompt and your poem

    good luck

    kat

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 6, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

  • mcfreeman
    September 5, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Captured by its full pull.....

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 5, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks millions

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    September 4, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Beautifully written

    This is a great write glowing with life and hope. Very well done young lady. Best of luck to you in the contest. Boog

    • Kazytc silver member
      September 4, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Thanks millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX

1 - 9 of 9