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Dawning Strength

Dawning light against the dark;
The calm upon the sea.
Humble strength is His mark,
He loves to leave on me.

Dawning Son on earth so dark,
With strength like the sea.
He comes for those who bear His mark.
He comes for you and me.


© 9-4-08

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    September 7, 2008
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    great thought

    it really expresses a good view about the pic
    short and to the point

  • mcheadle
    September 5, 2008

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    What a write

    One would almost think it was the Master spealing these words- I know through you He did Great job....mac


  • Warrior of Peace
    September 4, 2008

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    wow

    God is our strength. He is a huge reason why we llive everday., I love thi poem keep it up. I enjoy reading your peoms.

  • goalsv
    September 4, 2008

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    A great poem about the strength of God that He can take us through anything. He is also truth and that is where we hold to His promise.


  • Samplette gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Yes, yes, yes!! Praise God for His Truth and Strength. This is a wonderful write Bob. Thank you for sharing it in the contest.
    Sam

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