Image Credit: Kaleidoscopes
Your edges cornered and twisted
sedentary colors
pulling threads from the leanest crevices.
Wheel cogs burned gears
searing ears with light-sound
while pretense courted
with a ballast of painted glass.
Minions halted to explosions
perplexed by gaped ravines
with unexplored wonders.
Rotations glistened
squandering emotions
for the sake of diamond luck
and I stood
barely in
and enchanted.
Author notes
"Lacuna Coil"
A contest entry
- Winner Takes All: 1000 POINTS!!! by Jasmine Rayne.
1000 points, ended September 13, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem was so amazing... I can't even put into words the emotions I felt while reading this. I'm too astonished!
" Rotations glistened
squandering emotions
for the sake of diamond luck
and I stood
barely in
and enchanted."
Absolutely beautiful. Your vocabulary is wonderful in this piece. I loved it through and through
Thanks so much for entering. 
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THank you so much for your amazing comment and the honor of bronze in your contest. I am so pleased. GREAT prompt, Super Contest. ~Pamela
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Oh I like this and I love Kaleidoscopes I never get tired of looking through them you did a great job with this best wishes and much love
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