Sand
In your hair
And
Your hair was the color of the sand
I remember that night
So well
Came home so late
And
When I tried to fall asleep
There was sand in my sheets
A contest entry
- Verse prompt - not a lyrics contest, just tell me what you feel. by Topaze.
800 points, ended September 7, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you interperet this poem to mean? Any suggestions in improving it?
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Unique and beautifully penned, this says so much while leaving things to the imagination
Best of luck in the contest
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~Manda
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Oh I like this very unique taste on the take. Thank you for this fine entry in the contest.
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