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Kindred

     Dancing,

       swirling auras of light,
              dying: being reborn...
                            ..in sync

                      Universal

                       energies,
                     reforming;

                   reconnecting
                          life.

                  Spiritual colors once
                             human in form,
                                now explore the cosmos
                                    together.

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Username: islekine......
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  • aboomer silver member
    September 6, 2008

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    Beautiful 'islekine'! I've have to copy/paste this to show you which lines I like...lol....it all goes so nicely together. I do, though, especially love how you've ended this,

    'Spiritual colors once
    human in form,
    now explore the cosmos
    together.'
    What a gorgeous image!!

    Nicely done. Thank you for this entry.
    best wishes in the contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    September 4, 2008

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    You have captured the sense of movement and energy in the prompt and given it a feeling of transcendence -- "now explore the cosmos together."