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The life before him

Watching your back for the lover you once knew
trying hard to forget about his hands, his words, his kisses.
This love has ruined you
your confidence and life.
You spend your time looking out for this monster you once kissed.
What ever happend between you both.
You feel your heart beating faster and faster as he comes up behind you.
You go to turn around
but he is faster, he kisses your neck
once again you fall for him,
you feel his teeth in your neck.
The life before him is the life you want but will never get again.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 7, 2008

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    Hum..I love the intensity part of this sharp piece..with its strongness around the words.....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing...