Watched the tears hit the ground
Pounding with the rainfall
The stress built and agony rose
Tried so hard to stand tall
The sorrow remains for the loss that day
The weather became so cold
Still catches me every now and then
That you left, you weren’t very old
I lay awake at night these days
How you did it traps my mind
I cry myself to sleep at times
Then the nightmares follow behind
I think of myself doing just the same
Dropping and it going black
The slightest sound of a pin drop
Makes me jump it seems so whack
Now I wonder how to go on
The visions flooding my head
It prods at my heart with pain
I can’t believe you’re…
A contest entry
- Show me your best! by Forgotten Anomaly.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2008, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well writen, emotional. Death is a hard thing to deal with and sometimes it never goes away. Thank you for entering.
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wow....beautiful....i like the ending, how it just trrails off...doesn't need a word....
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Wow, that's really beautiful and really sad.
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you're what.
YOUR WHAT!?
ha.
sorry, this is really good my dear.
you should write more often.
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