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Thought you'd never ask

They sit on a bench                       
talking about old lovers
she blurts out                             

there was this funny little bird
the color of fresh grass
pink waistcoat
used to strut on my windowsill
belting out songs

wonder if he remembers me

wind grins
drops a feather
green and pink

that's when she hears him sing
Loud As A Rock Star


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option # D
photo credit : photobucket

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  • penman gold member
    September 18, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    excellent take on the prompt.. I love this one a lot..
    the imagery that you've used is excellent..

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • charcoal
    September 5, 2008
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    thank you


  • CaliOkie silver member
    September 5, 2008
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    Wonderful images. Great response to the prompt.

    Garrison


  • arafura gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Lovely. Great imagery, poet!

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