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wintry silence

Feather falls
unchecked
angels wing
unbidden
into life
then.
frozen in place
wintry silence
my angel
trapped in ice

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option e

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  • Eusebius
    September 9, 2008

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    bravo

    Cute, interesting and intriguing short poem...you have achieved a marvelous winter effect in but a few lines.... bravo... bravo...


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    I really enjoyed reading your poem.. you did an excellent job with the prompt..

    you have only 19 words.. I asked for 30 - 60 words.. if you would come back and expand on this more I would love to read it.


    kat