dragging my feet in the cool sand,
Love.
a pain deep inside me churns
i can't control.
writing on the sand
portraying my love.
for you,
my one, my only.
i cant keep you forever
just one day more
lost and alone
now your gone
my heart is forgotten.
ripped away.
but time heals.
my heart blooms, blossoms
love reappears
like the waves on the sand,
i am anew
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt Yay!! COME SEE!!! by BeautifullyBroken42.
450 points, ended September 8, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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but time heals.
my heart blooms, blossoms
love reappears
like the waves on the sand,
i am anew
Wow really true!! I love it so much!!
Silver Trophy is well deserved
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Wonderful poem. Short and simple but at the same time it held so much emotions. I especially liked:
but time heals.
my heart blooms, blossoms
love reappears
like the waves on the sand,
i am anew
I think this was the best part of the poem. Well done!!!
~Ruth~ -
oops. sorry one line went a bit wrong.
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