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Time waits for no man

As they say,
"Time waits for no man"
And forever that will stay
Although, one man had a plan!

He thought well then,
If it won't wait for me
I'll make the clock explode!
With his masterplan he smiled with glee

So he put his idea in motion
Although this was a silly notion
With a wave of a wand - a FLASH!
Time stood still and he ran like a dash!

Doing every achivement he wanted
He looked at the clocks as they melted
Then suddenly it finally daunted
What would he do with no social, so he belted.

He tried to undo the damage
But he was now forever doomed
He was now forever caged
As the grim reaper loomed

For now he is stuck in time
It is now time to say goodbye
He's done the dirty crime
He asks him self why?

Why did I  try to defy
Defy time for my own selfishness
Now I must pay for this crime and die
Why he did this is anyone guess

But now you see he pays his price
For there he rolled deaths dice
There is a lesson to be learnt
Don't let your self get burnt

Time will not wait for just you
Go about your business, wait & be true

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  • Bob Fox
    September 7, 2008

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    well

    Though many do see themselves as Timeless we all know better. But it is one interesting write you have penned here. Stop Time? and then what. Wise words young poet. Keep up the good work.


    • Karlie67
      September 7, 2008
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      Wow thank you your words are quite inspiring, thank you!
      Karlie
      xx


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    woweee i really like this poem, such reality of crime. Dont you wish everyone had a concious thou? very very well written


  • Ken-Maverick
    September 5, 2008

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    This is a really cool poem Karlie, you are getting better and better it seems.
    Keep up the good writes,
    Your mum must be proud
    Ken


    • Karlie67
      September 5, 2008
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      Thank you sooo much. I am really happy you liked this. Thank you also for you lovely kind words.

      Karlie
      xx

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